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Jazz in Common Time V2.3 by ~jkdeadite:iconjkdeadite:



Jazz musicians, ready stand
And join the band, hand in hand.
Will we, one and one, make two?
Time lays down what we must view.

Decrescendo, the lights go down,
Making staccato any frown.
Faltering first, then finding aim,
Sorrow does our great glee maim.

Graceful jazz stumbles through the air
As I breathe the beauty of your hair.
If I could stay like this forever,
To obligation, would I say, “Never.”

Rare and nimble, a flute takes the line.
Ten fingers tell me they are mine.
I would give myself away,
If forever they would stay.

Syncopation bends the beat,
While refuge I find in the tap of your feet.
When fleeting are the notes of old,
An instant is more than precious gold.

Brushes drag on with the drum.
Of secret moments, the word is “mum.”
May now what you clearly see
In honesty, exactly be.

A trumpet screams its fearless improv,
And joyous memories are recalled of
Holding each other, my arms around you,
While staffs, stems, and systems proclaim love is true.
©2006-2009 ~jkdeadite
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Author's Comments

This is the revised version of a poem I wrote for Hannah called Jazz in Common Time. The title has lost its meaning now that the poem has changed, but I believe I'll keep the title.

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:iconbabe61704:
...wow...

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"an arrow randomly lands at your feet"
-Kevin Duralia aka Cold Hand
:iconflyinturkonjava:
I like this one better. I dunno....I sort of even have music in my head to go with it.
:iconjkdeadite:
Thanks. I hope Hannah likes it when I give it to her for Valentine's Day.

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:iconbabe61704:
*sigh* that's just amazing. you rock! i cant wait to see you again :)

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"an arrow randomly lands at your feet"
-Kevin Duralia aka Cold Hand
:iconjkdeadite:
Well, I'm glad you like it. I just hope Hannah does. I did give it to her already, but in the first draft. I just decided to redo it for her a little more. Make some alterations.

Thanks for the comment.

See ya later!

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:iconbabe61704:
you're amazing... i know she'll like it! you totally rock!!!

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"an arrow randomly lands at your feet"
-Kevin Duralia aka Cold Hand
:iconbabe61704:
no need to thank me for the truth *wink* have a great time!!

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"an arrow randomly lands at your feet"
-Kevin Duralia aka Cold Hand

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